very good and it is very interesting. well done

Hey!

Thanks for reviewing my story. I wrote it in 2004 though lol. I had originally written a 2nd and 3rd chapter along with it, but accidentally cancled it before i got to saving it. So blah blah i got mad and didn't want to write it again. But still, thanks for reviewing!

I like how all Libby's brothers are so protective. Is it just me or is that undeniably attractive? Hahaha, i would swoon for a guy who loves his sister like they love Libby. I love Raquel too, shes hilarious :D.

Yay for the updates! Keep writing! I'll be reading.

I liked this chapter.

im REALLY liking this story right about now. so, um... yea. update extremely soon. youre doing a great job with the whole family. everyone's personality makes sense, theyre all funny, theyre all awesome, and i like taylor more than the other two brothers. him and dylan, though, as youve pointed out about 10 times during the 6 chapters, hes not actually related. the relationship between libby and her brothers, though, is just awesome. its really funny; like she hates them and loves them at the same time. well, awesome job with that, the descriptions, the lack of spelling and grammar errors, etc... again: UPDATE SOON.

keep on writing ~~MWR-::-

ps- i read your profile, because im planning on becoming a stalker (scoffs at this, yes my own words), and i completely agree with your dislikes. all that is just plain annoying. my best friend screams bloody murder at the sight of the tiniest spider. really. once in chorus, we were in the middle of a song, or changing music dont remember which, and she just got up, stomped on a spier that just happened to be ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE ROOM and happily sat back down. we all (my other three friends and i) just stared at her. spiders arent so bad. big spiders disturb me a bit, but not too much. i once watched a spider killing its prey in my room. it was... interesting. then it ended up taking forever and i walked away. hehe, my dogs are THE BEST sure, theyre a little on the chubby side (they weigh a thousand pounds, probably) theyre so cute and funny, and just plain awesome. i dont know about running in the rain, but ill definitely stand/sit outside in the rain. and storms are the best. i LOVE them... the post script is longer than the actual review. sorry bout that... just update soon, k?

LOL. I like this story. It must suck to have 3 older over-protective brothers, but I'm the oldest in my family, so it's just my opinion. Please continue! I can't wait to see what happens next!

wheres the next chapter!

i like this chapter, but its a little boring, ill see you today

Wow, lovin' it! A few grammatical errors but hey! Who doesn't have those? Okay maybe some people but don't worry about it. Lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

hey. good story so far. sort've spur of the moment thing...oh yeh, im sending you kids to greece for summer break. holy shit. i would practically pass out if my dad said that to me. haha. cant wait for more so please update soon!

GA

I noticed this the first chapter.

It should be Daniels, not Daniel's. And I think its the same for Raquel's last name. but I'm not sure

this is a really great story so far, I love the way you portrayed every character. can't wait to read more!

I remember when I got my first period, lol.. My mom was away [ My dad was acting awkward so my older sister had to deal with it. Ooh..When my sister got hers..she got it at a restaurant, and I ran through the restaurant (I was pretty young) yelling "elizabeth got her period!"

Lol..I'm telling you this 'cause the flashback made me think of it, lol.

ANYWAYS..Moving on to something that doesnt involve periods.

This story is good

It is very good. Please write more

omg i'm loving your story so far! its getting really good and it would get better if you invited Skyeler even though you probably were already deciding to invite him! omg keep posting i love this story! :D

Cool chapter, I liked it.