Reviews for Giving Up |
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![]() ![]() OMG i love the diary entry with ryan is like a dog omg it was so funny and cute at the same time! hehe POST A CHAPTER TO EVERYTHING CAN CHANGE im so eager to find out how it ends! hows mike? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy the story! Please continue writing. I'll be looking forward to reading more :D. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is kinda funny. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm interesting story so far, update soon please! |
![]() ![]() I really think you should stick with Libby's POV; that's kind of what's expected from the summary, so this chapter wasn't as good as the first two. |
![]() ![]() hey so i liked this chapter but it was a little confusing you have to have 1 nararator you cant keep switching and if you do then you have to make it clear who is nararating (spelling) send me the mike 2 chapters. gtg to bed ugh its only 11 but im getting up at 7 30 to go running ttyl |
![]() ![]() omg i love this story lol hehe ah call me! |
![]() ![]() hey girly girl i forgot you had this story, wow i havent been on fiction press in forever lol. so im gonna re read all of them and then go on from there. Can you pick up your phone i havent talked to you in seriously like 2 and a half weeks! Love,Jennie |
![]() ![]() Please update, i love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I really like this story.I like how everything seems to flow together and I like your writing style soon!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story here again! I miss your updates, especially for Everything Can Change... Anyway, it'll be great if you could take a look at my story, review it? I would love some comments from you! Cuz you're a very good writer, I WANT UPDATES NOW! xD Oh, I like the name Skyler. I think it's really unique, but it sounds kinda girly to me.. or maybe it's just me! ) |
![]() ![]() I like this story i think it will go far lol my birthday is so soon and im happy! LoveJennie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this it's good, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, I think it has a lot of potential. I especially like the mood the whole chapter gives off. |