Reviews for Giving Up |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh! I'm nearly hyperventilating. I admit! I skipped to the end (from chapter 8)(: I completely thought that Libby would end up with Skyler! With all the 'weirdness' tension thing between them in the first few chapters. Then, all of a sudden, in this chapter, she dates and ends up marrying Dylan? Totally unexpected. I think your writing style has improved from the first chapter to the epilogue, though the ending was a little messy and a bit confusing (but it may be my fault on that part because I didn't read the middle). The only thing that I didn't really like was the relationships between the brothers' and their respective best friends didn't seem consistent. I thought Brandon was Eddie's best friend? Then in the epilogue, Sykler became Brandon's? And the other thing was that the Daniels/Daniel's, your/you're and little things like that could be fixed?(: *goes back to chapter 9* |
![]() ![]() are they all full brothers and sisters? cause it seems like Libby has different parents than her brothers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay yeah, that ending was mundo rushed. But everything ended perfectly, so I;m happy. YAY for Dylan and Libby! Woo-hoo! I love all the couples, and the kids names sound cute. I just really liked this story in general, and you did a good job! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe she didn't pick either! I WOULD LOVE DYLAN FOREVER! Oh wow...I can't wait to see what happens in the epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't WAIT for the convo between Dylan and Skyler and Libby. I'm sure it's going to be joyous. :P I'm so glad Taylor and Elodie are back together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Elodie. What a terrible birthday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH HA! I WAS RIGHT! This clairvoyant thing works for me...:) And I kind of feel bad for Skyler. Poor him. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god. Skyler kissed her. And she told Taylor. And Ra's pregnant. Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Elodie. She seems sweet! And OBVIOUSLY, dylan is being a jerk to skyler because DYLAN LOVES LIBBY! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god...she's falling for Dylan? Woah. Watch me go into shock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! Skyler is somewhat growing on me. He seems a bit condescending though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Skyler, responsible? -scoff- And he seems..anti social. I don't get the entire romance thing so far. Soon, I hope. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, seriously? How random! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The relationship between Raquel, Libby, the three bros and Dylan really is tons of fun to read. Weird that her brothers actually like her, but still. Dylan is my favorite. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Eddie is a brother. I got it! And Dylan and Libby are so funny together...it's tres amusante to read. :P |