Reviews for Giving Up
dimethylmercury chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
Oh gosh! I'm nearly hyperventilating. I admit! I skipped to the end (from chapter 8)(: I completely thought that Libby would end up with Skyler! With all the 'weirdness' tension thing between them in the first few chapters. Then, all of a sudden, in this chapter, she dates and ends up marrying Dylan? Totally unexpected. I think your writing style has improved from the first chapter to the epilogue, though the ending was a little messy and a bit confusing (but it may be my fault on that part because I didn't read the middle). The only thing that I didn't really like was the relationships between the brothers' and their respective best friends didn't seem consistent. I thought Brandon was Eddie's best friend? Then in the epilogue, Sykler became Brandon's? And the other thing was that the Daniels/Daniel's, your/you're and little things like that could be fixed?(: *goes back to chapter 9*
jkgiggle chapter 4 . 12/15/2008
are they all full brothers and sisters? cause it seems like Libby has different parents than her brothers
blurrylights chapter 19 . 12/10/2008
Okay yeah, that ending was mundo rushed. But everything ended perfectly, so I;m happy. YAY for Dylan and Libby! Woo-hoo! I love all the couples, and the kids names sound cute.

I just really liked this story in general, and you did a good job! :P
blurrylights chapter 18 . 12/10/2008
I can't believe she didn't pick either! I WOULD LOVE DYLAN FOREVER! Oh wow...I can't wait to see what happens in the epilogue.
blurrylights chapter 17 . 12/10/2008
I can't WAIT for the convo between Dylan and Skyler and Libby. I'm sure it's going to be joyous. :P

I'm so glad Taylor and Elodie are back together!
blurrylights chapter 16 . 12/10/2008
Poor Elodie. What a terrible birthday!
blurrylights chapter 15 . 12/10/2008
AH HA! I WAS RIGHT! This clairvoyant thing works for me...:)

And I kind of feel bad for Skyler. Poor him. :(
blurrylights chapter 14 . 12/10/2008
Oh god. Skyler kissed her. And she told Taylor. And Ra's pregnant.

blurrylights chapter 13 . 12/10/2008
I like Elodie. She seems sweet!

And OBVIOUSLY, dylan is being a jerk to skyler because DYLAN LOVES LIBBY! :P
blurrylights chapter 12 . 12/10/2008
Oh my god...she's falling for Dylan? Woah. Watch me go into shock.
blurrylights chapter 11 . 12/10/2008
Aw! Skyler is somewhat growing on me. He seems a bit condescending though.
blurrylights chapter 10 . 12/10/2008
Skyler, responsible? -scoff- And he seems..anti social. I don't get the entire romance thing so far. Soon, I hope. :P
blurrylights chapter 9 . 12/10/2008
Oh my god, seriously? How random!
blurrylights chapter 8 . 12/10/2008
The relationship between Raquel, Libby, the three bros and Dylan really is tons of fun to read. Weird that her brothers actually like her, but still. Dylan is my favorite. :)
blurrylights chapter 7 . 12/10/2008
Oh. Eddie is a brother. I got it!

And Dylan and Libby are so funny's tres amusante to read. :P
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