Reviews for Ferris wheel
An Unfinished Angel chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Lol! He got robbed! Poor Bryce...
Breezy Cheese chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Lol... this was hilarious! And sad... poor Bryce.
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
LoL. Hilarious, btu also sad. He thought he found true love, but in reality he been robbed! LoL He feel for it! Great one-shot!

strawberrycrush chapter 1 . 4/1/2010

Poor guy.

Nice story :)
SmallTownUSAx3 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Haha, this one was pretty funny and it made me laugh. i like it. it just shows how people are in this world today, prety easily fooled if i do say so myself. and if your feeling generous you could R&R some of my stories if ya like. im only 14 so sorry if there...juvenile?
ukrgrl chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
wow that was so sudden lol por guy ...and she says she has a hard time trusting people lol by the way, is this based on anything that happened in real life?
Gunning Twice chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
lol, that's so funny! That's so freakin' funny! Oh my gosh, I feel so sorry for him! Poor guy...for a moment there, I thought the lady was 'decent' and all would end well. That was a slap in the face really. Something that shouted, "WELCOME TO REALITY, WHERE HOBOS LIVE IN THE STREETS, PEOPLE CON YOUR ASSES OFF, AND PUBLIC RESTROOMS IS A WHOLE 'NOTHER UNIVERSE! " or something along those lines.

Awesome. Simple awesome. :D

xoxo, Amber
x3life chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
haha! this was so ironic... ) i really liked it. i was expecting the whole thing where he like turns around and runs after her and they make-out and everyone is happy. but this was so much better! i totally love the whole regualr love story thing... but i think cuz yours wasent that, it made it so much betterr...
PurpI3.14 chapter 1 . 11/12/2007

That. little. -insert swear word of choice here-

lol! haha omg! i did NOT expect that

GREAT WORK! i loved it XD

LadyLush chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
aw i thought it was going to be such a sweet story lol but it was funny. it caught be by surprise lol great lol

HollowxPromises chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
HAHA! Love it! I wouldn't be suprised it that really happened. What. . :P

A couple of typos made but it's not that important...

You seem to write a lot of stories like that- guy get's caught out by a clever female :D

We're just too fantastic ;)
Kimberli Kitten chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Oh my gosh! That was so funny! Not what I expected at all!
Squirrel Activist chapter 1 . 6/2/2007


I swear to God, I was not expecting that at all, and then POOF HHAHAH

I started laughing out loud

This is so going in my favorites!
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
hahahahhaa. this is so funny.
LL Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Very awesome surprise ending. But I wouldn't understand why anyone would do that to a guy like Bryce. Anywho, keep writing!
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