|Reviews for A Cherub Pink Bra and A Portable Umbrella|
| MM chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
But, this is cute
| balloonfista chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
| blurrylights chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Aw! That was just so heart meltable! Can I have Charlie? He's the best! :)
| deliriousity chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
so cute ~!, made me laugh a hell lot jus now
| milenaa chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
I love Charlie. Hahaha! I think it would be very fun to write/read a companion one-shot to this piece, this time focusing on Charlie.
Anyways, I liked James and Emma. Their chemistry was pretty good and how he got jealous and sad at the same time made it interesting. Well-written as well. Good job!
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Aw...this is such a sweet story...
Haha...Shut up, Charlie. You kill the mood. d:D Lol nice touch at the end. Wonderful story.
| Clanker1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Dare I say it? I do! AW! Hehehe. Loved it. I'm a total sap for these kinds of things. But no really-it's written very well and is original enough with a balanced amount of cliche that everyone wants. Good stuff. :)
| Caught By Myself chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Kirsten Miliani. I think your name is beautiful. Anyway, back to the review.
You brought me to tears!
I was laughing and giggling and I was so touched. Sure, the story is quite simple, but, well, it hit me.
My favorite part was when James put the jacket around her and put his arm around her protectively, and then he called her "my Emma". Awwhh, that was so sweet. Anybody would have seen beyond that.
That was a great read.
| A. Cox chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Please hold for ten minutes of "Aw!"*ten mintues later*Now, please hold fifteen minutes for applause!*fifteen minutes later*And now, for what I have to say! And what could that possibly be? It goes as follows: Man, why can't something like that happen to me? ;-; you are looking at the queen of no love life... heh... but enought about me... great story! keep it up!
| Firespirit44 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Aw..this is just too cute. Emma and James sound really sweet together. But you know who my favourite character is?
| tornangelwings chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
that was so sweet and romantic exactly perfect
| WickedMe chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Oh wow, thank you for the sweet and delightful story. After reading some depressing stories here on FP, your story really pulled me out of my depressed state. This story made my day.
Wonderfully written. Hope to see more of your work.
| dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
hey gurl...loved it...aww that is so freaking sweet..well its good one-shot..well anyways just heading out then gurl...bye-bye then...:D...
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Ah, that made me smile. James is so sweet. And the ending is hilarious. This story makes me want a pink demi-bra. )