Yes, I compleely agree. Innocence does grow up to be loyalty, and balance must be kept; we see it now, in this mad hatred to anyone who is not on the side of the good guys, and who are the good guys? I think that raw loyalty and the courage, as you write, to follow our friends into hell, is little in evidence today. What I hold true and most hopeful in this essay is that it is anything but simplistic. We have far too much simplicity today, and it results in what we see around us and the horrors perpetrated in the name of a God that is a combination, if I read you and what I see round me right, of greed and cruelty and the desire to accumulate power whatever the cost. It is so good to read about innocence in children again. It is so good to read this grows to friendship and a real sense of right and wrong, that just because someone says something categorically is the right thing, does not mean you have to automatically believe it; I feel such shame for what is being done in my country and in my country's name-I had been looking for the one right word that would express how it feels-and you have given me that words-balance-exactly-you have said it honestly and clear as a bell and I for one, along with your other fans, hope many people read your work, especially this essay, for what is done in the name of humanity comes with the human equation, and that human equation is the need to respect and the need to be reflective, the need to understand that, through computer chats as you write them, and through every DNA in our body, we are deserving of controlling our one fate, not insane thugs controlling them and us; it's up to us to provide balance-thank you very much for saying it so well.

Bravo! This was really good. You have a very good understanding of the human mind, great job!

very deep and philosophical...i liked this one alot

Very good. And I just had to tell you: it's not sink, it's sync.

*speechlessness* wow. i really enjoyed this piece. i love anything that challenges my mind and makes me think. great job

Wow, I favorited this. Seriously, this has so much meaning and likeness to how I feel about things. You're quite the philosopher. I have a lot of oppinions on things and I like to read other peoples, especially as elogently put as this is. You're a good writer, and your grammar isn't as bad as you make it out to be.

ANNA

Well, one thing I will say is that you know how you feel about things and you stick to it. Nor are you afraid to let others know.

I'm not so sure I totally agree with what you have written in the bold section, but you do have some good points. I especially liked "If the order of balance is disturbed then the reminder (remainder?) of the equation balance is chaos. We as humans must see through this chaos, and guide our vessels to a sanctuary..." However, I feel as though some of your statements are a bit narrow. It's difficult to group all humans together with one way for all of them, for there are some distinct differences between different humans.

But overall this is fine. I think I would like it more, but I just do not agree with everything you have written. Your writing flows together rather well, but with a few more years of english classes, your grammar/spelling should also improve. (I'm not trying to insult you, if I am, sorry. I kinda suck with grammar and spelling, too. But both my sisters are english teachers, so they're on my back all the time. :P)

Thanks for the review!

Much love...TinuvielDork

P.S. You used the wrong sink. Instead of sink, like the kitchen one, it should be synch. (Stupid english!) :)

Whoa. Compared to your other (sorry) unentertaining and juvenile peices of...work, this is truly well-thought out and interesting. Spelling got in the way, though. Use that good ol' dictionary, man.

Deep, my friend deep. I do like this, it offers many things that can be recognised as true, i'm not saying that your a liar, you arn't but you are offering things that people can see from any piont of view.

Oh and 'sink' my friend is where you wash dishes, oh wait you let the machine do that cause you're RICH! But sink is the balance.

See, I gave a resonable review that told you're up and downs and didn't curse at all, how fun was that?

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Now i'm just rambling... SO it was good if you acually read this far... keep it up ol' buddy... THATS MY WORD!

All right; where to begin? First of all, you show much insight, but I have to disagree with you on many core points of your essay, but, for the sake of space and lack of irritation, I will publish my own story, explaining my views on said topics.