Reviews for don't look at me
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
this piece is so beautiful, the format and the words, you have such talent! Excellent work
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
The first three lines and last two are awesome.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
because i hate the way your words singemy flesh (as it tears apart in layers)...thats dreadfully beautiful. tragic and touching, its a fragile painting.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Wow, the last two lines just blew me away. The way that you express yourself is wonderful and the structure of your poems is always wonderful to read.

Keep it up.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Wow, the last two lines are very sad.