Reviews for Four Old Men
LEW chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
The last six lines have stuck with me ever since the first time I read this poem.
SaRmelLexia chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
interesting piece...i like it a lot!

Lots of Love, Hugs n Kisses
BearHeart chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
This is a great story. It brings the characters to life. I like the last two lines. They speak to me of sadness and loss without stating sadness and loss. You have a gift for characterization.
AsianScaper chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Okay, I've probably written you more reviews than I have anybody else in a year. Either way, I'm loving your story-like infusions into your poetry. It's very fresh and at times, surreal. Particularly like the description of men, their wives, their private tellings and their own, cryptic connection to the character talking at the end. Wonderfully done. :) Wishing you all the best in your writing endeavors.
Susan O chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
What an awesome experience. I bet you learned a lot that day. Nice poem, it sets a good mood. Thank You.
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Clearly, people don't know a masterpiece when they see it or this'd have dozens of reviews.

I really like the last two lines.