|Reviews for Girl At Heart|
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/7/2019
How the fuck does this have so many reviews? Like, from your author notes you seem like an okay person but your story is undeserving of all this popularity imo.
The plot was basic, there was no real character development and the protagonist was the most unrealistic I’ve ever read and to top it all off you’d insert the cringiest Author notes or remarks in brackets within the story! How unprofessional!
I sincerely hope your writing has become better
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/21/2018
OMG! This was a really cute story. I absolutely loved it! It was funny, romantic, and just incredibly GREAT! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/26/2017
why r all da female names wierd and the male names normal
| Caspar Lee chapter 20 . 3/26/2017
cliché ending lol
| LOVE THISS BOOK chapter 5 . 3/26/2017
These chapter names are just plain savage
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/30/2015
This is seriously the best book I have ever read! I really hope you're still online to read this.
| WTF chapter 20 . 11/18/2015
It was pretty good u should make a second!?$$$&& !
| Kacey chapter 12 . 11/11/2015
This is turning different... The characters aren't exactly very innocent anymore.
| Puffisha chapter 5 . 11/11/2015
"treat em mean, keep em keen" xDD IDK WHY THAT'S SOOO FUNNY m8!
| Kacey chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
I'm in love with this and so into it already. I'll most likely read every post you put up. Thank you for your work and effort, I finally found something to kill time with xoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxxo 3
| Misa chapter 15 . 7/7/2015
Forgot to give u a review and cookie for the story since i'm to caught up reading it xD
| Misa chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
It's interesting! It mase me crave for more
| annayh44 chapter 20 . 5/19/2015
The only thing that disappoint me is she no more agent. . cry cry .but others all were so so happy happy ! love this story. .confirm it as one of Best story i ever read
| Julietish chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: There’s been an attempt on the life of the First Son and Loralai, a quirky undercover agent is assigned to be his bodyguard and investigate the case. The only catch? He attends an all boys boarding school.
The cliché of pretending to be the other gender is almost always one filled with hilarious misunderstandings and near misses and Girl at Heart certainly does not disappoint, with more humour than you can shake a stick at.
Loralai does not seem like she would be a good agent – she’s excitable and fun – but she can also take responsibility when the events call for it. Her relationship with James starts out tentatively as he thinks her a little strange (Loralai does introduce herself by talking about Area 51) but the two become friends.
The grammar and pacing of this story certainly aren’t perfect, especially at the start, but they don’t distract from the story too much. Instead, Promiscuous Geek’s style rather suits Loralai’s personality, since she is the main narrator, and her tendency to go off on tangents.
Overall Girl at Heart does what a comedic story is supposed to – it makes you laugh, a lot – and the ending will almost certainly put a cheesy grin on your face for the rest of the day.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Cute story !