Awesome Story and ending! :)

awesome story! this is so sweet :)

OMG this is the most funniest weirdest (in a good way) story ever! love it :) :D

'Taking long masculine-ish (AN:I don't think that's a word but whatever) I entered the dorms building all the while hoping that Winters wouldn't already be there.'

Taking long masculinish what?

enjoyed reading this one!thank you so much!

I just reread your story again after a couple of years and it still manages to crack me up. Your characters are hilarious and I love the random things that Lorelai spouts out of her mouth when she gets nervous. James and Lorelai make a great couple and I'm glad that the two found each other again in the end. :D

This is so funny...! I love it! I'm not giving an explanation... I'm too lazy! :D

I love this! It was absolutely amazing to read and I could not stop laughing. Congratultions on such a fantastic story and thank you.

am in love with this story!

hahaha omg this chapter had me in hysterics! i was blushing and trying to cover my eyes because i was embarrassed for her but i couldnt i had to keeep reading love it and i love the whole different take on girl in boys school being an agent and all its awesome!

dis was awesum...!great job :) i like lori more ;)

Hey! This story has been re-reviewed for the Humour archive over on A Drop of Romeo! Here is the review:
There’s been an attempt on the life of the First Son and Loralai, a quirky undercover agent is assigned to be his bodyguard and investigate the case. The only catch? He attends an all boys boarding school.

The cliché of pretending to be the other gender is almost always one filled with hilarious misunderstandings and near misses and Girl at Heart certainly does not disappoint, with more humour than you can shake a stick at.

Loralai does not seem like she would be a good agent – she’s excitable and fun – but she can also take responsibility when the events call for it. Her relationship with James starts out tentatively as he thinks her a little strange (Loralai does introduce herself by talking about Area 51) but the two become friends.

The grammar and pacing of this story certainly aren’t perfect, especially at the start, but they don’t distract from the story too much. Instead, Promiscuous Geek’s style rather suits Loralai’s personality, since she is the main narrator, and her tendency to go off on tangents.

Overall Girl at Heart does what a comedic story is supposed to – it makes you laugh, a lot – and the ending will almost certainly put a cheesy grin on your face for the rest of the day.

OMG! THIS IS LIKE THE CUTEST STORY EVER!

I love how Loralai is an agent and all and I love James and his friends. :) Especially Resse and Liam! They're just SOO funny and cute.

Oh, and TERRY! I LOVE HIM TOO! :) 'cause he's funny and arrogant, even though he doesn't know how to fight. :)

Vanessa is so cool too! :) She's like the coolest girl agent EVER! :)

I love your plot by the way. :) An agent falling in love with the one she's protecting, not to mention, the guy being the president's son. :)

Anyway, I LOVE LOVE your story! :) Hope you write more stories like this! :)

LOL the second chapter is the funniest! XD you are a good comedian :)

Is she an agent for the government? If she is, why is she not confident, not collected, she blabber and the list goes on... Anyway, this story is good. Rory's character wasn't convincing though and the conversation in the first chapter weirded me out.. But this is actually pretty funny..