|Reviews for Delude|
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
I find this poem beautiful. It reminds me of Tim Burton's clay animation. The imagery and atmosphere is haunting, almost death-like. I love it.
| windowless room chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Your words painted a vivid scene. Great job-I loved the last line. It seemed quieter, like just waking from a dream, and I could feel the yearning in it. Oh, and the poem had a very nice shape. (Literally.)
| NotJustAnotherVillain19 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I love this poem-great word choice, and I especially love the ending! Great work, hope to see more!