I stumbled upon this story. Because it hasn't been updated, I assume you've abandoned it. I'm going to review it anyway! I will say first that I'm a HUGE bosox fan, so I was slightly bummed that there was no mention of the redsox in the first chapter! You did a wonderful job incorporating descriptions that made the sory come to life. I also liked your use of the cellphone throughout the story. It really tied it together. Jasmine's relationship with her mother also seems very relistic! I know that you probably fill your time with other pursuits than writing for fictionpress, but I beg you to continue. You have an exceptional talent at giving the story meaning and reality. PLEASE, PLEASE continue with Diamonds!

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You have no idea how excited I am about this story. I'm a rabid Red Sox fan and have grown up in and around Boston. Its great that your story is taking place in such an amazing city! I like Jasmine, she seems like a great character. Nice ending too, I really want to know what happened. Was she engaged, is she still engaged? And who is this Clayton guy? Cant wait to find out!Well all in all you did a good job!Make the Chapters a little longer and they'll be Writing-EVA