|Reviews for Hope of Paradise|
| Frodo13 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
that's awesome, I really like the ending and how you kind of entwined Ectonios' story with Christ's crucifiction.
really good work. keep it up.
| searchlight chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
"...if the LORD did exist, He must no longer care for Ectonios, because of all the evil things he had done. Yes, that had to be true." I think a lot of people think like this. I really liked the story, as it went on it got better and better, the end was the best! (as far as writing and concept). The only criticism I would have is when the guards were talking about blasphemy-because they were Roman, they probably wouldn't have cared. What an awesome short, great going-keep those fingers a-tappin' so that we may continue to read!