|Reviews for I Should Tell You|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Interesting line breaks in this one. You switch strengths on us part way through - the woman's words go from bursting hapazardly to dribbling down her chin.
Sad piece, yet very authentic.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I think I'd actually like this just as much without that ending sentence, just because it doesn't add anything so much as it repeats what we already know. But.. yeah. I like it. We've all been there, haven't we..?
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
this has a sad little feel to it. it's very well written though. interesting.
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
wow. flows. so neatly. so perfectly. captures the moment & prints it out indescribably well. ps thanks 4 allur reviews :)
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
its sweet. I love the way you write. Awesome. Nice work!