|Reviews for My World|
| The Warrior Maiden chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
hehe...sounds like some of my own earlier work! awesome idea that u hav yr own world that is basically dreams and shadows. i liked it!
| Aco Night chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
M. Sorry, going to have to be a wee bit critical here. First, the note. To be honest, I actually only came her to bash you about that. Kind of antagonistic, no? Please at least make an effort. That said, I do like the title, and the brief sort of style, works well. But the rhymes are a little cliched. I mean, they work well, but they're cliched. With a bit of tweaking, this could really get somewhere. It's okay as it is, but then in a way that's the problem: it's okay, not great. That said, bear in mind it's still got the potential. Just try not piss people off with the tagline next time, okay? _