Reviews for Clutching the Railing
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
This is very thoughtful and it's filled with reasons and revelations. Favorite?

a serious breeze swings boldly/across the balcony, early morning,
Naibz chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
very beutiful. no faults in this one. great work. I enjoyed the second to last stanza. great image and. and the questioning and comparisons are superb.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
small and tragic. a whirl

of cigarrette smoke

off the balcony

love these images :D:D
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
"Where does silence sleep?

And do butterflies hate flight,

like I, shivering in this

dreamsky moment."

This part has do much substance, it hit perfectly. Well done.
Anya Mannequin chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
gorgeous. completely gorgeous. i love "and do butterflies hate flight, like i"amd "last night i lost every thought of you. i felt small and tragic."this is really great
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
interesting. you know what, you're one of the few writers that makes me think when i read your comments. Faithless Juliet being the other one. anyway, as usual powerful usage of physical and visual imagery. keep on going!
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
This one is insanely vivid and so well put together. love!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Where does silence sleep?And do butterflies hate flight,-ugh, just ugh. so beautiful it is almost revolting

so curving and spite. makes my eyes water
Margot Tenenbaum chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
this is wonderful.i love the imagery!