|Reviews for Clutching the Railing|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
This is very thoughtful and it's filled with reasons and revelations. Favorite?
a serious breeze swings boldly/across the balcony, early morning,
| Naibz chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
very beutiful. no faults in this one. great work. I enjoyed the second to last stanza. great image and. and the questioning and comparisons are superb.
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
small and tragic. a whirl
of cigarrette smoke
off the balcony
love these images :D:D
| elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
"Where does silence sleep?
And do butterflies hate flight,
like I, shivering in this
This part has do much substance, it hit perfectly. Well done.
| Anya Mannequin chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
gorgeous. completely gorgeous. i love "and do butterflies hate flight, like i"amd "last night i lost every thought of you. i felt small and tragic."this is really great
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
interesting. you know what, you're one of the few writers that makes me think when i read your comments. Faithless Juliet being the other one. anyway, as usual powerful usage of physical and visual imagery. keep on going!
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
This one is insanely vivid and so well put together. love!
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Where does silence sleep?And do butterflies hate flight,-ugh, just ugh. so beautiful it is almost revolting
so curving and spite. makes my eyes water
| Margot Tenenbaum chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
this is wonderful.i love the imagery!