|Reviews for Suburban|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Very clever poem. And very true, as you stated in the poem. Love it. Great work. Keep writing! :)
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
loveloveLOVE it. xx
| Pricilla Grey chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Clever structure, clever poem.
- Pricilla Grey
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Says a lot with few words. Well done.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
The beginning and ending were nice (liked how the poem could be reda with or without the words in the parentheses)
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
clever formatting! I like it!