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| Your little sis chapter 2 . 8/18/2008
Yeah. I wrote two chapters for this. do you know where the other one went? it was weird, but i loved it, and i can't find it anywhere...
I still love my character, silver...
| Bob chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
Tis iz reely baad and anoying its hard 2 reed cuz uf baad puntation and now neu pargraffs plzthanx fix
| Bob chapter 3 . 5/31/2006
gits reely cunfyouzing and soundz lyke its rushd w-o commos and new paragraffs win othar peopel r talkingplzthanx fix so i can reed it correktly
| Jasmine chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
| Jasmine chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
Just one question...are they in canada? Because if you look it up in a dictionary, the "yah" you are speaking of is actually "yeah." unless you're in canada. Or minnisota. like...Think of how Mrs...oh what's her name...not Justin's mom, not mrs. vickery...that other one...starts with "h"...can't think of it. it'll probably come to me later...And you mention Love Train twice at the end. did you mean to do that? Since this isn't writingforums, i'll shut up now.
| criti-sized chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
So what's going to happen next, I was wondering. I just hope you update the next chapter.