| Reviews for Gossip |
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   CandleQueen chapter 1 . 8/18/2007 Luckily, I've never experienced anything like this, but I believe you captured the emotion well. Very nice choice of words. Keep writing! -Ramen |
| Crewger chapter 1 . 4/18/2007 I love your overall mood to the story... just, I'm pretty slow, threading away? is that really a phrase? but really, I love the last section where you emphasized FRIEND... uh, 'friend' O good job, thanks for the review |
| Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 8/1/2006 Cool. I like this. |
| Alyosha Karamazov chapter 1 . 7/30/2006 I love the pinpricks and bleeding heart imagery. the whole thing is excellent. |
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 7/6/2006 very well done, I loved it |
| delete this page 109231 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006 I really liked this poem, I just found that i could really relate. oh well. It was an amazing poem keep writing ~Godly luke staden~ |
| Rytia Malachite chapter 1 . 7/2/2006 Shame on me! Boy have I missed out on a great poet. I just realized that you reviewed me...oh eons ago, I'm glad I'm finally able to return the favor. Sadly, I know naught about poetry. But! I do know what I like, and I really like you style. It is straight forward enough to be great for us poetry retarded and contains plenty for deeper thinking. |
| asteria24 chapter 1 . 6/30/2006 This is such a wonderful poem! Great imagery - you really made me feel the narrator's pain. Five stars, this is going on my favorites list. |
| Ice and Snow chapter 1 . 6/9/2006 i can totally empathize! it's a lovely little piece. you should write more. - |
| Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 6/2/2006 You wrote this poem in a very artistic way. Different from the other poems I have read here. I like your style. |
| Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 6/1/2006 Is a good one, I like the pale blood image, I see it like fake 70's movie blood spilled over rich purple velvet; so fraudulent it entraps us in a different way. Maybe i'm not making much sense; sometimes i'm barely able to stop myself from mixing emotions and reality with images and time; but you seem to do this as well to some degree, so maybe you'll be able to understand what i'm going on about. It is unmistakably a broken image you paint, but a reparable one. I enjoyed it a lot. Alan |
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 5/31/2006 new format? I like! Truly spoken from the heart. Bravo. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san |
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 5/31/2006 BEAUTIFUL! I heart it like I heart all of your work! HEARTS :) |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2006 I liek the format.. the parenthesis work well and the needle metaphor is awesome.. one thing I would replace while I try to block out those words(those pinprick words with while I try to block out those (pinprick) words the way you have it now seems a tad too repitious |
| tableau chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 That's an interesting way to look at gossip. I like how you related it to things other than just hurting other people. |