|Reviews for Loverspell|
| Dove chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Well...I know whom this was about, but I don't know if that makes me feel any better.
You do make cheating sound...exciting….which sends a prickle down my spin. I know, I know, a poets imagination. "You get me hot, baby. I'll pin you down with my little thighs"...That's some imagination you've got there.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
The more I read the more I like it.
"Oh, you ethereal fuck, stop stroking me with your eyes" - Yum.
Jesus, you make adultery such a beatifully erotic thing.
So, adding to my favs. So.
| rightclick5ave chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
ohmy this is absolutely brilliant. you took the adultery topic and made it sound so alluring and morbid at the same time.
Never cherishing, / merely is wonderful. the superficiality of their relationship, if you can call it that.
The blankets / barely cover me / and my use of words.. how very apt.
A kiss / to worship / on my this too. man, you're good.
I won't tell / if you won' ending to this poem.
this is going into the faves (:
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
"Oh,/you ethereal fuck,/stop stroking me/with your eyes."
Those lines. Those lines stole me away. I'm adding this to my favs for that.
The imagery of this poem is striking.
The more I read this, the more I love it. Adultery. Such a poetic subject when you write it like you did. Yum.
| Countess Chocula chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
As I've said before, you amaze me. You really do. You have such a talent for conveying emotions. I honestly envy you. Amazing poem.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
this is lovely. the feelings are so raw and real and the references absolutely exotic. sexy.
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| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
out of all your pieces, for some reason, this is my favrit. i dunno. maybe i'm just a pervert! ;) excellent job.