Reviews for Loverspell
Dove chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Well...I know whom this was about, but I don't know if that makes me feel any better.

You do make cheating sound...exciting….which sends a prickle down my spin. I know, I know, a poets imagination. "You get me hot, baby. I'll pin you down with my little thighs"...That's some imagination you've got there.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
The more I read the more I like it.

"Oh, you ethereal fuck, stop stroking me with your eyes" - Yum.

Jesus, you make adultery such a beatifully erotic thing.


So, adding to my favs. So.

~* Noelle
rightclick5ave chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
ohmy this is absolutely brilliant. you took the adultery topic and made it sound so alluring and morbid at the same time.

Never cherishing, / merely is wonderful. the superficiality of their relationship, if you can call it that.

The blankets / barely cover me / and my use of words.. how very apt.

A kiss / to worship / on my this too. man, you're good.

I won't tell / if you won' ending to this poem.

this is going into the faves (:
smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
"Oh,/you ethereal fuck,/stop stroking me/with your eyes."

Those lines. Those lines stole me away. I'm adding this to my favs for that.

The imagery of this poem is striking.

The more I read this, the more I love it. Adultery. Such a poetic subject when you write it like you did. Yum.
Countess Chocula chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
As I've said before, you amaze me. You really do. You have such a talent for conveying emotions. I honestly envy you. Amazing poem.
lackluster chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
this is lovely. the feelings are so raw and real and the references absolutely exotic. sexy.
brents rose chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
heck yes!
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
out of all your pieces, for some reason, this is my favrit. i dunno. maybe i'm just a pervert! ;) excellent job.