Reviews for A Scrapbook of Autumn
0981-Gunner chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
I liked the part where you said that you bought a twelve pack of months. I'll add the other ones to my scrapbook in time. I liked that too.

To me, the scrapbook isn't a literal scrapbook, is it?
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
"I bought a twelve-pack of monthsThe other far I've only used September.I'll add the other ones to my scrapebook in time."

Very creative and almost nostalgic..Well-done!
Lirael1 chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
This poem made me smile. It shows a very keen insight with skillful pacing so that you lead the leader along until it all comes together at the close. Pleasing the mind. :)
chocohound chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I liked this poem a lot. The concept of remembering a month instead of a certain time was unique, but I liked it. Septmeber wwouldn't be the month I'd choose to remember, but there are lots of other months I should do t hat to. My favorite lines were:"When time comes looking for its lost parts" and, Time is oblivious.I don’t think it could take an entire year back,Even if you hid it out in the open Or under the parlor rug." As well as the idea of buying a twelve pack of months. This is going on my favorites!
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