Reviews for Butterflies
Firespirit44 chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
God, this is so true. Especially the last few sentences:

"How she hated those butterflies. Yet secretly, she loved it when they were awake inside of her, making her feel so alive."

This is the part I liked the best. Good job.
Andrew B. DeWar chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
No words can actually describe this short story but, Brilliant. It captures the emotions perfectly, which it should (*ahem*). I give it the five thumbs up.
cdr1687 chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
This was short, but good! Hey maybe check out my stories if you want. I like urs!