|Reviews for Five Minutes|
| hear me smile chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
too, too true...
I like the simplicity, though I would be interesting for you to explore that moment when they finally arrive.
oh, and by the way, when I said "I love the beginning of this; that's all that ever matters, anyway" on my reveiw of "Infinite Moment", I meant that it's who you're with that matters, not the beginning of the story or that I liked it. Just wanted to clear that up, cuz it sounded weird when I looked at it after.
Can't wait to read more!
| Andrew Blair DeWar chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
very emotional. A little rough here and there. Good poem, but there are some spots that probably could be improved, but don't take my word for it, poetry is not my specialty.
| My Bitter Swan Song chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I used to get thru math by feeling like that...but that was before...
i updated some stuff too...i think...i don't really remember...