Reviews for Five Minutes
hear me smile chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
too, too true...

I like the simplicity, though I would be interesting for you to explore that moment when they finally arrive.

oh, and by the way, when I said "I love the beginning of this; that's all that ever matters, anyway" on my reveiw of "Infinite Moment", I meant that it's who you're with that matters, not the beginning of the story or that I liked it. Just wanted to clear that up, cuz it sounded weird when I looked at it after.

Can't wait to read more!
Andrew Blair DeWar chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
very emotional. A little rough here and there. Good poem, but there are some spots that probably could be improved, but don't take my word for it, poetry is not my specialty.
My Bitter Swan Song chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I used to get thru math by feeling like that...but that was before...

i updated some stuff too...i think...i don't really remember...