Reviews for aphrodisiac laden
Tyndall Blue chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
if only they were...the last line definitely made me chuckle...when i read the first line it was to the rhythm of "black sheep black sheep"
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
itissocute. why can't life be as sweet?

* Noelle
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
lol calorie free. if only real sugar was calorie free. keep on going!
beulah-land chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
lovely.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
lol.. I love that last line.. so perfect and the format in the first line is great too.. awesome piece
B. M. Reed chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
haha the last line is funny ] cute poem!
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
amazing...just amazing imagery and choice of words and ... just wicked
frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
i love the last line. it symbolised so much for me...it has so much strong emotion and imagery and it is just beautiful.
having reached closure chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
ah gorgeous, im in love with the last line :)

-naomi
multiples of six chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
This poem is so short but it still manages to get across the feeling. I love the "my my my" and the last line. Nicely done )
beti213 chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
haha you GOT it. the words that so many people meant to say but couldn't find. the only odd part about it was the word "estranged." somehow, it doesn't seem to fit.
bread and circuses chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Heh, I read the first line the same way astral boy did. I love it.

That is all.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Wow, loved this poem, it's so... I can't explain it. Wonderful poem!
account not in use chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
made me laugh-a little-because it strikes me as alittletoperfect.

but then, that's how poetry should be.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
i love this! i love the feel of it, the taste of it, the 'why aren't you calorie free?'. . . it's just life. meloves.
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