Reviews for Hand in Hand with Apollo and On to Hephaestus'
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I didnt really get the myth reference a footnote at the end explaining the ppl in the title might be hekpful.. I still liked the poem a lot though... the whole shapping & jewlery thing was awesome.. great piece
a lonely september chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
this is ohsopretty. i love the way that it's written and i love the last four lines especially. i love how this has a nice little referencedsomething or another... yes, i dont know how to speak right now. but it's interesting. and this is good. (god i suck at reviewing).
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
wah, i love how you used 'my metallic icicle heart'. the last line really, was well put. great job!

keep writing!
frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
beautiful work. 'you were very dear and ohsonear/to my metallic icicle heart'those lines were ended on a really strong note too,brilliant.
water lily nymph chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
There are so many pretty lines sprinkled throughout this piece. My favorite of all has to be "and i remember how you used to touch the morning snowflakes at sunrise." Very sweet.

I also like the way you formatted -accessory- to look like a bracelet. Nice job on this. :) *