|Reviews for Glasses|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
i have a hard time feeling for people that are deceased. i dont know why, just feel cold about it.
you made it almost in a comical way. funerals are so odd.
| Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
This is so touching, so simple. I could tell it was perfectly heartfelt just from the way your thoughts roved around from morbid to naucious to silly to horrific. Truthfully, I've never had an experience like this but I feel you've embodied it pretty completely with this story.
Your grammar is great but there was one sentance that bothered me - "I was in a room, with a high ceiling and hand painted walls, antique furniture, richly colored carpets." first comma not needed.
"How can anyone possibly feel right telling me happy birthday when their mother or aunt or grandmother or sister or cousin wont' have any more birthdays?" that's such a poignant line.
Lovely work. best luck.