Reviews for Breaking Point
Captain Lucky chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Wow! It was really intense in its own right. I liked your word choice about ice and shattering and what not. I got cold just reading it. )
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
i like it. the whole thing is wonderful. great work!:)~Liz
Aquafied chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
mm, buffeting.

i love the feeling of shattering it
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
wow - so intense. I could feel the cold and sharpness, hear the wind screaming. Great metaphorical imagery.