Wow. Wow. That is so completely horrible. I can't even imagine.

You like Manga? ME TOO! AH! What kinds? Which ones do you read?

Oh man, this is so bad. So bad. Like i don't even know if I can take it. (that's a good thing, it means i love your charcters enough already to care about their emotional wellbeing.)

Aw, JJ saved her. That's so sweet!

ARGH CLIFF HANGER!

Congrats on becoming one with your characters, by the way. :-D

whoo, that was fun! heheheh.

I liked all the details. i really like Tommy, he seems pretty cool. hahaha, Texas. What's it like? Where I live, it snows a lot. I love snow. I don't think I could live without it.

I like that flashback. It's really sweet and happy and fluffy and beautiful. i love that kind of thing!

haha, it seems we are a small circle, us femslash fanatics. i am an avid reader and reviewer of Knightmare Elite. She's amazing, I highly reccomend it. I can't wait for Demon to get what's coming to her. And JJ has such a hard life, it's terrible.

Dude, i play softball too! firstbase! i'm sorry you and you friend fought. I'm sure this is after the fact, so i hope everything ended up well. Oh man, LOW BLOW! that's horrible! OOH, I am really pissed at Demi now. Like, really pissed. There's definitly, like an unwritten rule for gay people that you don't talk about it in public when someone isn't out. At least, i would never do that. Wow, you go to a Catholic high school? is it all girls, because that seems cruel to me.

yeah, that's exactly what i think about Demi, that it could be an exaggeration

wow, this Sci-Fi thing sounds just like my school's Marching Band. Nerdy, and the nicest people in the school. It's really hard to get a sense of a character's actual personality when the story is told from a biased narrator. interesting. So, i'm trying to reserve judgement on you charcters who are disliked by Sake

I'm going to be annoying just this once, it's effect, in the first paragraph, not affect. Aw man, i always get the headache after I cry. m, i'm liking this JJ person. she seems sweet.

aw, the end is so sad... makes me wanna cry.

Wow, i kind of like the way it's written as a journal entry. It's sort of a stream of consciousness. I like that. Even though i don't understand it all, that's what people's minds are like, so it's cool. I like the part where she's thinking about what those girls think about. One thing i have to critique, i think it's unrealistic and weird for a person to describe their own eyes as enchanting. that's it.

Wow, seems great so far! I love the first line, so beautiful. I know how that feels. I am so jealous of your main character already, she's already had a girlfriend. She's lucky just to love another gay girl. It's really bad to fall in love with straight people. I get the feeling that this story will be very wish-fulfilling for me. I don't really know though. Anyways, I look forward to reading more.

Now that was nice. I liked the leg wrestleing part that was nice. Anyways keep up the good work till next time.

That's definately a sinful pleasure. Amora is taking a huge risk with her heart and feelings, but sometimes it's what's needed to truly understand the basis of a love you hold so dear. I'm interested to see what the future holds now that Amora is in good spirits for once. Can't wait to see more, awesome work as always.

Good Chapter. Update Soon.

An ok chapter, srry to hear bout u bein' sick. Update soon.