I wouldn't say it was stooping to their levels I would call it their right to have al of that done to them... wel everyone but Ha. So yeah... anyways keepe up the good work.

Wow this chapter seemingly came out of nowhere, it's the perfect thing to pick me up after my absusive work schedule, always nice to see an update on one of my favs. I have to admit Amora has some awesome friends, that's what we all strive for on some level, true friends who will have your back, compassionate and understanding. Thanks for brightening my night with a wonderful chap, till next time.

thats probably the biggest problem with being gay, is the constant confusion. somewhere along the way, the lines of morality kind of... blur? although, hetero relationships do the same thing- most prelevant example, the pitt-jolie thing. he cheated WITH her, why wouldnt he cheat ON her? so maybe its more an everyone thing than a gay thing. and now i sound like an old philosophical geezer... thats what happens when you try to classically train a tweleve year old... haha! yeah! anywhoz, hope everything works out for everybody, and that the puppies survive that the evil beast was drinking blood from... wait... ha. ya.

YEAH! GO LUCY!

whoever that lucy girl is based off of must be one cool kid ;)

anyway, great great chapter. i loved the friendship theme, it really makes you step back and think about how no matter what your friends will have your back. and that being gay is just being gay... and there are more important things than focusing on that.

well done.

Oh dear what a plan... I rather enjoyed that little New years eve "Party" is what I shall call memeory does haunt both of us and what a memeory that one would be. I have a few interesting ones that might make well not an interesting story but the things that came out of them are quite entertaining one. Anyways till next time keep up the good work.

i got your email (trying not to whine...) my fingers broken, and i set it myself instead of going to the hospital (im a fucking IDIOT) you have no freaking idea how long it takes me to type shit. newhoz...never ever visit the old people state if you can help it. it sux down here. im coming back SOON.

This hasn't lost my attention, it's one of the few stories I really keep up with. Most always end up so cliche after the third chapter, but this has so much drama and it's all so realistic and relatable. I really enjoy the flashbacks, they really layer the scenes and give so much meaning to every event that follows when jumping back to the present. Don't feel bad for taking a while to update, we all have lives, never rush and put out something you're not content with for the sake of getting it up. Just take your time and above all have fun that's what writing's about...well for most people I guess.

hm. disturbing. do you realize s&m also stands for sadomashochism? i thought that was funny... anywhoz... kool aid and vodka isnt bad together, a at least not when combined with the taste of vomit... eww ok, im out.

hi... im sorry im not reviewing much, im in florida at the moment and internet time is rare and precious... ok, no icu, but the black eye was gr8. kk, g2g, there is apparently another chap...

Ah drinking and being Gay what a combination. It's always fun not that I have done it. But it has be more fun then being gay and in the closet with your parents thinking she is just a friend...and that is pretty fun but it leads to more then enough trouble. Damn memory lane I am trying to stay away from it. anyways till next keep up the great work.

Cool chapter, I love flashbacks sequences, when they're done right though. That whole drunk thing reminds me of a party i went to. I have the most pathetic alcohol tolerance but that another story. It was interesting to see how intense the kiss became between the two. I could only imagine the depth of sexual tension after the kiss was broken up, though the alcohol induced delirium usually calms that, or intensifies it. I hope things are going to be okay with Anita, she's a bit hysterical. Your cliffhangers are so evil! Can't wait for more.

Darlling, you know how I feel about your story. :) It's fantabulous. I must admit that sometimes I'm a little sceptic of the sheer amount of the drama in this little thing, but then again, no one has had as much drama in their life (that I know) than vous. I hope you continue to write this and I'm glad that this is a ...hmms lemme think of the word...carthartic experience for you!

Love, moi

May I say that the violence was amazing sometimes I wish I had the guts to do something like that and that the results would be as good. The better thing is that the violence wasn't over the top it had more to it then just violence. The diolauge was good to. Anyways I figured you had let fiction take over because of that lovely kiss at the end. You started writing fiction I wrote poems... Some of which I have actually postedon one site or another. It does make you feel damned proud to know that you no longer need that person to survuve doesn't it? I know I have that feeling. Till next review keep up the amazing work.

What a great way to get into a saturday afternoon, a new chapter. The bit about someone findind a new update in their email was funny though I'm not much for author alert.

Anyway onto the story what an intense chapter! It wasn't the fight that really carried the chapter, but everything before, during and after the fight.

There was so much emotion between Amora and Jacqueline. The way they completely let to of all inhibitions and went head to head. With Demi using JJ's emotions as a catalyst for the ultimate destruction of her and Amora's friendship.

Like i had said before you built up the fight wonderfully. And don't feel that it wasn't enough, because it was such a multi-layered scene in having an readily availible cause for every action.

Demi finally got what she deserved, but this also one of those debatable situations. Do the ends justify the means? Will an ass kicking really reconstruct such a tainted romance? Or is a slow and articulate backlash brewing in Amora's agressive stride in redemption? So many questions, I can't wait to see what you have in store.

Oh and a small error 'She lay their on the floor groaning as the bell rang' I think you meant 'there'

damn. and here i was, hoping to see demon get put in intensive care for a few days or something... and then no. oh, well, it was funny to think about. lol well things are coming along nicely... i hope everything works out with jj and everybody... god knows they all deserve a happy ending. alrite- see ya l8er