So enthralling is this journal. It gives a perfect feel into what it's like to simply be human, and the simple emotions and struggles we face day in an day out just to understand.

Vague or not the intro has caught my attention. It has that realistic feel that many strive for but few attain. Can't wait to see the drama unfold.

well written, darling.

i look forward to the next chapter ;)

and the descriptions are rather striking. i'm impressed at how well you can describe people.

poor girl... it sux, being stuck around ur ex all the time, especially when you still have feelings for them. i know from personal experience. what makes it worse, tho, is when you live in a town where homos are lynched on the spot... at least these girls stand a chance. newhoz, enough babbling. really good job of writing, i couldnt tell if this was your own diary or a story... which is ani difranco a real singer? i liked the little bit of her lyrics there. nice n.n

*stares* Man. I guess I never actually submitted the review I wrote up of this chapter, huh... That sucks.

Well, short form of what I was going to say: nice chapter! The narrator's voice stays consistent, which is nice-especially since I know that can be pretty hard to do sometimes.

I feel for poor Sake and JJ, and dislike Demon already... But I suppose that's exactly what Sake's aiming for her audience to feel, huh? I can't help but wonder whether Demi's really as bad as Sake thinks of her.

You have a very nice narration voice going on in this story. Plenty of personality, and not at all annoying-or cloying, which is something that I sometimes worry Angela can be in Confession, even if it -isn't- a first-person story. _;

My only suggestion for this chapter is just to put a divider of some sort between your author's notes and the story itself, just to make reading flow smoother.