Reviews for Just Looking
Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
this seems to be deeper than i can put a review on. but i will tell you i like it, very much. really emotional.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wonderful and insightful poem. That part - "I whisper a prayer" sort of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet when Juliet's nurse turns on her and Juliet responds 'Amen' as if her nurse had whispered a curse. Great job with this. Keep writing, s.
Tikklz chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
This trend of liking your style continues. You have a great way of saying a lot without suffocating the reader with detail. Sometimes it's a little confusing, but most of the time, all poetry is. So, once again: Great job.
emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
So good! I know, really descriptive. But this was amazing! The last lines really brought this to my attention. I like how you really did keep it "simple"- the language wasn't excessively flowery or difficult, and the imagery was sparse, but that's what it was all about. I like this. Keep writin'! bella