Reviews for broken by the boy with the soft blonde hair
xxoh-the-possibilitiesxx chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
hey, i really liked this. you used very good emotion, and i especially liked how you did the last "broken" with slashes in between all the letters. very good. keep writing :)
Abnormality chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
I like the use of repition. its builds a strong point. though i'm awefully ashamed of your incorrect use of brake/break. shame shame
Flies chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
Really I'm not sure about this poem. I love the wording, the fragmenting, the structure, everything, but the subject is almost too cruel by it's blatant-ness. But still, great work!
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
cool work, I would have informed you of that grammatical error too (sorry)

Err, sorry again, I reviewed one of your works and said you didn't specify if it was a haiku and you did, so sorry for that.

Keep writing

Alan
heartbroken922 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
the repitition in the poem makes it pretty powerful. well done. i loved it.
anon chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
It isn't spelled 'brake'. It's spelled 'break'. Idiot.