Reviews for That One Face
123454321 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
The second line... Hmm, I don't really like it; it doesn't seem to have correct sentence structure.

Also the line 'Never withering, never ceasing, never loving', 'loving' doesn't seem to be the word to end it.

Other than those two things, I really enjoyed this piece. It is blunt (but I am coming to understand that as your style), yet flows well.


Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).
myownlife chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
so very well written. I think a lot of us have that one person whos face we seam to see over and over."Why would I relapse to old habits and vices?" that is the one question I think we all would ask ourselfs. Keep up the good writting
WannaBWriter chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
its short but insanely powerful! the whole thought of the "premature grave" was brilliant! the whole poem just sounded as if all hope for a second chance was just dead. i loved it!*thank you for the review! it is greatly appreciated!