Reviews for My Lover, My Brother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() now that is a way to get a head in life. pun intended. i like this story a lot! you totally have to write more and more and more and yeah you get the point! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! ::pounds head on table repeatedly:: MUST ::pound:: READ ::pound:: MORE! ::pound:: How did Cold get wings all of a sudden? Me thinks he's an angel! Speaking of one-shots (Bakura: Who said anything about one-shots? TBL: -.- Shut up, Bakura...) I might want to do a one-shot, but as of yet, I really don't have any ideas...and um...yeah, I'm going to end it here... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thought I'd review since I never do. Still love your story, keep it up. -WNWO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh! I still think the chapters are too short. Something good JUST starts happening and then BOOM its over. Such a tease. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool and interesting story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I do love this story ever so much but fail to review most of the time. Here it is! Keep it coming, can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far I love your story. Cold's kind of an ass, but that just makes it better somehow. This isn't your typical incest (not that incest stories are truly typical to begin with) lovey-dovey story at first glance. It's got animosity and grit to it, which is just bloody awesome. I hope you continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I love this! IT's addicting... strangely... I lust for more! So give your fans MORE! |
![]() ![]() Ah~ Poor Cruel. He seemed alarmed. Well yeah, but, hehe. Will he then cry his heart out on his older brother chest? But then, will Cold take advantage? Ahh, so many questions. Haha. Well, I have one thing to ask. What is 'succubi' ? I couldn't find the definition of it. This story is interesting. And it made me go 'ahh~' into fangirly mode. This is my first time reading a story like this. So, I'm looking foward to what's going to happen.I like the way you describe the scene and such. Very good visuals. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good- twisted with more than a but of lust.I will put this on so I will get an e-mail when you update so I may read more. -Still Forgotten |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was actually pretty good... I was just trolling for stories to review when I stumbled on yours. I was kind of iffy about the whole yaoi thing coupled with incest, but... you made it work. Pretty good, would be even better if you made it longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm...I like it...but you have one problemo...NO MORE CHAPPIES! AH ~XOXORaventonguethemalice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wasn't all excited about the supernatural aspect of the story since so many tend to fuck it up, but you my friend, did it brilliantly! Love love! I love this story! |