|Reviews for The Kill|
| 1243565765876987098697586745 chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
That's just plain freaky.
A few mistakes with grammar, but good
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Anyone reading this, yeah... I wouldn't do that, I just notice some grammatical errors here and there. Was a while since I read the original, based on it though. Good job overall. Just scary to hear Travis all over it knowing it refers to me in some sense.
| angel953 chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
you need help!1
i think im gonna block travis again. great job!
| Viktrona chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Creepy. I love the story line. The writting is really good. I belive it can be written better once you mature more when you write. Since the more you write the better you get.
| i.am.the.winter chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
nice job. i think even though it's a short story, the mystery could have taken another twist, but it's still well done. and it is similar to my story, i didn't know that.
and don't worry, i'm going to update soon. hope you enjoy it.
- the devil in a midnight mass
| NowNameless chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Hey, That's GREAT! Much better than the orriginal. a few changes, beautifuly written. i like how you changed the murderer to be travis, and how they were murdered in diffrent ways this time. MUCH better. also its more realistic. WRITE ON! (*Gasp* its so good, 'write on got THERR exclamation points!)
| Pheo chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Oh I love this story! its very very godGREAT WORK!~Lots of Love and Pain Mezo~