Reviews for A Single White Rose
multipleminds chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Wow. This is really good. And deep. It really is amazing.
multipleminds chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Aw wow. That is really pretty. Really deep and meaningful. You're a really good writer.
Fleshlings Bane chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
I like this, it has a sense of someone willing to give up everything for the one they love. I dont know if that is what you are trying to achieve, but that is my impression. I appreciate your review of my story, the eclipses are a bad habit of mine. I seem to put hundreds in everything I write, to give a sense of aloofment? Anywayz really like this story, keep the poetry flowing
PessimisticOptimism chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Wow. That was wickedly awesome. I love the imagery. And thank you for your review. I appreciate it. _
Shara G chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Quite meaningful! And the rhyming flowed gracefully. I'm thinking that this can symbolize my own beliefs right now.
Ness3665 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Wow. I can sort of understand the symbolism behind this. However, the last two lines... they were needed, but perhaps you could have put it a little more... eloquently?

- Ness
BrownEyedGirl90 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Wow...this is really good. Thanks for your review by the way. I didn't realize I told it like that...it's kind of a brief history, she learns more later in a story format. I'm writing a research paper for school (on slavery, yay!) and I haven't had time to work on it in a while, but I'll update ASAP.
Maggie chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
That is really sad, but I like it anyway. :)
justateardrop chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
'Later, the paramedics find the angel dead,' thats such a great line - even perfection has an expiry date. love it! great piece, nice rhythm :D