Reviews for A Single White Rose |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is really good. And deep. It really is amazing. |
![]() ![]() Aw wow. That is really pretty. Really deep and meaningful. You're a really good writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, it has a sense of someone willing to give up everything for the one they love. I dont know if that is what you are trying to achieve, but that is my impression. I appreciate your review of my story, the eclipses are a bad habit of mine. I seem to put hundreds in everything I write, to give a sense of aloofment? Anywayz really like this story, keep the poetry flowing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was wickedly awesome. I love the imagery. And thank you for your review. I appreciate it. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite meaningful! And the rhyming flowed gracefully. I'm thinking that this can symbolize my own beliefs right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I can sort of understand the symbolism behind this. However, the last two lines... they were needed, but perhaps you could have put it a little more... eloquently? - Ness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...this is really good. Thanks for your review by the way. I didn't realize I told it like that...it's kind of a brief history, she learns more later in a story format. I'm writing a research paper for school (on slavery, yay!) and I haven't had time to work on it in a while, but I'll update ASAP. |
![]() ![]() That is really sad, but I like it anyway. :) |
![]() ![]() 'Later, the paramedics find the angel dead,' thats such a great line - even perfection has an expiry date. love it! great piece, nice rhythm :D |