Reviews for Sea Song
Ferdinands-Savior chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
Gorgeous, just...gorgeous. It's so real I can almost feel it. I can definitely see, that's for sure. Fantastic.

Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Nice song you have here. I liked the descriptions, they seem a little abstract, very narrative. Also the length of the poem is exact in my opinion.
emsworth chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
I love this, mallika! particularly the following lines.."the hard banging meteorites, the nine crashing planets", "what's moving beside them, what's brushing against them". i love you, and this is really, really good. i don't think the 65% rhyme comes off though, it's a bit awkward