Reviews for Ten Rides
carifoo2001 chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
Aww. That was adorable. :3
morphus chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
I really like the concept and the way you realised it. More lovers should unite on the bus. :P
missgoodenough chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
very cute, not too repetitive at all.
elma chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
LOL it was a nice story. The summary was really intriging and that reeled me in and the story wasn't what I expected but I can't complain it disappointed. The ending was cute too haha.
blurrylights chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
"I'm not weird or anything."

That was so cute! I really liked it...sweet and innocent and just adorable. :)
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 1/21/2009 cute!


mellorine chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Good work!
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
gulistala chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
I can't completely relate to this but I can on some level because I had a long time crush on a guy who took the same bus as I did in the mornings. I never got to talk to him of course because I noticed him too late. I moved a couple months after I got a crush on him. Ah well. D

Nice work, by the way.

Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Cute and creative. Simple yet kinda sophisticated writing, and awesome plot. I love this because it's cute, and I love fluff. Hehehe. I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2, and of course, that you wrote this. (:
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I agree with her, the tenth bus ride was pretty nice :p

x3life chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
this was really cute! but, i felt like him asking her out was a little fast, they didnt have enough interaction... and the whole thing with the 10 bus pass thing, isent that pre-paid? so why does she sill pay when she gets on?
starlit x sky chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Aww this was really cute.

I like how the bus rides were numbered, and I liked how it ended.

Good job.
found.eventually chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I didn't even noticed the repitition, being too caught up in the story and all. This is wonderful. Short and sweet. Gasp. :) Need I say more?
Day2Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
wow, as far as writing exercises go, i absolutely loved this D ... in fact, even if it hadn't been one, i would have loved it anyway! i did get a little put off in the beginning by the huge chunky paragraphs (i'm feeling a little flighty), but i forced my way through it, and i definitely can't say that i'm disappointed! hehehe, it was a fantastic story, with a fantastic ending, and i just thought i'd let you know that i really enjoyed reading it ) hope you had as much fun writing it!
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