|Reviews for Ramble: The Drunkard At The Back Of The Bus|
| Pripri chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
i've been meaning to leave a review about this for ages. I really like it-the description in your rambles is incredible! do more! xx
| Meihan chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
i skimmed through it. Didn't have enough time to read it right now. But it seems pretti good so far even though I only skimmed it. anyways keep on writing and nice story
| luke staden chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
its luke sorry about the former review. again i have to say it was great and you know i am just joking when i insult you?
| delete this page 109231 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Y ou did a great job!O h my god i loved itU nderstand i have had a lot of sugar right now
S omething about it really got to meU ndescribable how it feels when i read thisC an you keep them coming!K eep them coming!
| Matriarch Zealot chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
*Scans over other reviews and grins* See Scrunchy, they like my idea, nyah! But the idea is nothing without the person who expands on it...
| Poppy chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
bonjour, i would hope you're asleep now, so you will be nice and refreshed to revise for all your lovely exams :P i've been awake for 2 hrs (it's 8.20) which is bad cos i have a clarinet exam today, anyway, the ramble... it's really good, cos you manage to convey the sense of release that "the bottle" brings, not so much because it makes him feel good when he does drink, but because he can't cope wihtout it. woah, long sentence, anyway, i love the last sentence, it really brings the whole thing together. x
| Olivine chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
you see, even when youre half asleep, though you probably werent even that, you can write really well. better than me at this ramble thing. i actually tried writing one, since you suggested i should, but im not so sure of how it came out. ill put it up tomorrow since im tired right now. its not even typed. lol, i bet the whole world is tired today. -looks over to the fat yellow labrodor sleeping (and snoring) soundly a few feet away from me- ah, the weirdness of the world.
haha, did you seriously fall off your chair? whether you did or not, i could see a 15 year old guy just sitting on a chair at some sort of computer desk, laughing so hard (or grinning, your pick) that he just falls off. lol. yes, i know what you mean about not really writing regularly. its the same with me and my poetry. i dont write all the time, only when somethings bothering me or im inspired by some (random) thing. dont feel bad, though. i like it when it just comes as a surprise when i see you on email alerts. it just makes your work better, somehow. i dont know. im weird. insane, maybe. thats how tired i am right now. lol, i dont know very many 'softies' that are guys, lol. i dont think that sentence really had to do with anything, so... yeah. and to answer your question, me is in america. and yes, im aware that i said 'me' is. im not really american, though. me is indian. and NOT native american, i HATE with all my heart when people call native americans indians. im not one to glare at people, believe me, but when were in social studies, and someone says 'colombus came to america and found the indians' i send them a death glare and correct them. my teacher just laughs. -shrugs- anyways...
i do think i just gave you a whole two paragraphs that have nothing to do with what im reviewing, sorry. well, what can i say? its definitely random, like your other ones, but more random than them. although it does mean something. i wish i could do that. and you know, if you really think about it, its about, well, almost a reason, i guess, for drinking... ? well, theres my interpretation of it. and thanks for... thanking me, lol. ive never gotten a 'thank you' before i reviewed. thats awesome.
keep on writing ~~MWRenaee-::-
im going to sleep, now.
| Precious Death's Whisper chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
No need to worry about it being bad, Scrunchy. I like it. It's a good way of showing everyone that some people hide in drugs, not do them because everyone else is doing them. It's still not a reasonable excuse, but it still shows there's more to it than just peer pressure. D Good job, write more! xD