I like this one too *sways to the right* It's detailed, has a wondrous image in my mind. Keep at it

WOW! That was really great, seriously, really great. Are you yourself a slam poet? (thank you for reviewing "Denial") : )!

By the way, you're amazing.

(I need to teach you how to fix the formatting, though...)

It's so pretty! I especially like "leaving dreamers seething" and "stay in your spectrum"... but you know all this already, because it's written in coloured pencil all over your papers, with smiley faces and stars.