Reviews for I Love You
MetroxStation chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
I rlly can relate to this poem it is very well written!

P.S.- I think it is supposed to say "leave" in the beginning of the 17th line.

-xBDx
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
So very sad and beautiful. I love it.

-Isabella May
frezbo chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
I love your conceptual ideas!
Rothwyn Escarlata chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
This is a very nice poem...I like how it flows so easily despite the freedom of style. You have an excellent way of putting just the right words down and nothing more so that your emotion comes across in itself and not weighted down. If a suggestion could be made, I would change the first line...the antiquated syntax, I believe, detracts from the poem because it is the only one that is not written with a contemporary style and confuses the reader as to how the rest of the poem will read. Beautiful poem-I shall read more of yours!
Sa-ah chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Man... The feelings your poems express are amazing. I'm going through this state... I know how it feels. Brilliant work.
Cara chapter 1 . 1/4/2002
i love the emotion in this, i feel the same and i'm glad u wrote this i know i'm not alone1
The Carrot Princess chapter 1 . 5/4/2001
Very nice... Kinda sad though.
nicky chapter 1 . 2/28/2001
*ouch
emotionless angel chapter 1 . 2/27/2001
hey, that was really good. i like your poems, and i think you shold write more _!