Reviews for Hitchiking
Awsome17 chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Holy...Theo u hurt my new love Danny.(*becomes murderous and holds a butcher knife*)

.Pay!(*suddenyl cuts up shushi*)

Here you go! (*happy, beaming smile*)

Oh sry if I scared u. Don't worry the most Theo will get is food poisoning. But he deserves it for hurting Danny. That is why you don't get into cars with strangers.

Anyway I love the story pwease make Danny better and get him away from crazy Theo.
R is for Rebel chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
For some reason, I'm anguished to see nobody has given you a second thought of reviewing. And for some reason, this made me laugh. Alot of your periods are a bit messy, and when you seperate speech into a "new paragraph", so to speak, it gets confusing. Other than that, it was a pretty nice read.