Reviews for Through Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, I really love the way that the story is going. Your devious mind is great if I think I know what your thinking of with Tristian and his little asian flower. Lol! keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. Good chapter, good new characters, good intrigue, good plot. I mostly like the character of the girl even if it is a bit cliche, but her vulnerability (assuming it's the same girl) came out a little bit in this chapter. Anyways, no real critiques- just hoping for the next chapter to come! |
![]() ![]() YAY! *applaude* UPDATE SOON! Anyways... nice description and stuff. You have a way of attracting the reader's attention. :) |
![]() ![]() Awesome! Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() Sound great so far! I wonder how things will change at the girls' school when they arrive. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() Yay! *applaude* Nice intro... though I find it somehow weird that the necklace would just "appear" in her pocket. RMB... funny. w |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm. conspiracies much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I love your writing style, it honestly makes me giggle with delight at some points and it scares me. Thanks for the cliffhanger (note the sarcasm) about who this chick is. Reading this story is going to be so much more painful than reading its prequel. All the chapters were already written when I read that one. It'll be worth it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh.. I'm so so glad to read this story. I mean, I love false facades and I'm so glad that you've decided to write a sequel. Anyway, nice story, nice starting. I totally love the student exchange thingy and the girl Tristan met. Oh man.. I think I'm addicted to this story already. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() goodness! please do not do this! no! i never wanted tristan and sammy to be together, but i want tristan to be single forever! i don't want him to be with that kinda girl (the china lady)! please! no! well, that's all i wanna say. and nice writing.P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...please update soon. I dunno what's happening...are they betrothed? Is the girl some kind of prostitute that's supposed to try and get Tristan (oh lord i hope not). HURRY UP AND UPDATE SO I CAN FIND OUT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great,chapter! I feel sorry for poor Vincent (well, sorry for me because I was to see Vincent with Sammy lol). What's up with this Lee dude? So for, I think he's an ass, and he annoys me way too much. I wonder what girl Tristan is "supposed" to meet, and possibly be with. Could it be that one girl in Beijing? Or even Sammy? (I hope not, because Sammy...plus Vincent...equals happy people lol). Why is Sammy supposed to go? Is she supposed to meet up with some dude too? Or possibly just hang out with Carrie all the time...with no guys around...maybe just Vincent. hehe :D Kinda weird how the Lee dude knows all about the couples, and such...even more suspicious. Hm, I just have a bad feeling about the guy... Fantastic start! Update whenever you have the time to do so! :D :~::*::~:Silent-Rebel:~::*::~: |
![]() ![]() I can't wait for the next chapter! Great idea for a sequel. Can't wait to see Tristan at the girls school ]. I'm really glad the story is more focused on Tristan; it seemed to me that he wasn't mentioned enough in False Facades...Go Tristan! .-Please don't keep us waiting for updates! |
![]() ![]() Can't wait to read more and see how this will develop. I've got so many questions right now. What is the connection between Tristan and that mysterious girl? I guess I'll just have to wait. - I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so want another chapter. Majigney-Foofoo |