Reviews for Through Me |
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![]() ![]() OMG! i am soo glad u decided to write a sequel. so glad! i just reread false facades because i was bored.. and i still love it! i hope i will love this one too! it seems very very interesting. not like FF but in a way simular. I like how will get to go to he girls school because he is just so increadibly funny! oh, and by the way, i will never ever ever go read another story in place of one of yours. it would be blasphemy. (did i spell that right?) anways. I don't mind these chapters.. i understand the need for background info. ya. so great chapter! can't wait till next week! ~cpe |
![]() ![]() SO glad you decided to write a sequel!I like the introduction and I'm curious to see where this is heading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story's good! I loved your other story (It's defintely my favorite one), False FAcades. So when I found out there was a sequel...I was ecstatic. Tristan is one of my favorite characters, second to Will who's just a sexy beast in all his glorious perfection. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! Awesome! I loved the first one and this one seems as if it's gonna be just as good or possibly *gasps* better! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! I didn't realize there was going to be a sequel. It's good though. Lapotorus |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH Mandy! Maeven's got sequel? Everyone run! Run to the nearest exit! Hehe. Kidding. Great story, just hope it doesn't turn into another replica of your first one though. Also, found the meeting of the chinese girl and Tristan a bit weird. Why would anybody become so obsessed in telling someone how to cross a road? Weird, but then it's unique in the approach. Oh, and is Tristan's Dad in on this too? Can't wait for the update! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't realize you made a sequel, but good thing I did find out! I really like the beginning.. the idea of the exchange student program. But, of course, it seems kind of planned anyway as Stephen Lee seems to have specifically chosen Tristan to go to Wrenfield. The unidentified girl I'm guessing is the same as the one in Beijing that ran into Tristan. Is there some gang-related activity going on? Why does she have to meet Tristan and do something to him that would make Lee pity Tristan? It's nice knowing you've got pre-written chapters, so maybe the next chapter will come out in the following week or so! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! I wish the whole thing wasnt a "random pick" but i guess it just means there's a lot set up for Tristan to deal with! update SOON!PS: I just got to say that I still love will! he makes me laugh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAYAYYAY! Your writing a sequel and I am sure that this will be awesome because False Facades was amazing! Hmm this story has an excellent start so far and I wonder what she has to do? *next chapter* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like that girl...whatever her name is. Um, I WAS expecting a character that was opposite of Sammy's, but well she is a bit inconsiderate. I think that maybe I shouldn't blame her so early on, as she must be in a bad situation with her family, and I do think she is good deep inside. Hmm..well please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting...I want to se where you're going with so far so good. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, the ending was very cliffhangery. And when you typed in " especially since only of you is a girl." , did you mean "especially since only one of you is a girl"? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness gracious! I sequel! :) I'm so excited! lol. I'm glad to see that Tristan is finally about to get some action, lol. And Will is still so much fun! I love your writing! It's amazing. I'm suprised that you don't have anything published. But one thing: maybe you could put in a little more Caine (just a little bit though). I know he's not the main character or anything, but he's my favorite, lol. He just thinks he's so smooth, lol. But seriously, I can find nothing wrong with the story grammatically or otherwise, so it's all good. Anyway, I hope this review was motivating! I'm hoping for the next chapter to be up soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I'm glad I caught this story early on, otherwise there would have been blood drawn. Not really; metaphorically speaking. But, I'm liking this! I've always had a soft spot for Tristan...I'm not sure why, but I always thought that he was a bit more noble than Vincent. Maybe a bit more deserving. Or he just appeals to me, to be quite frank. It's exciting that he has his own story! He totally deserves to find a love of his own. So, I'm assuming that this new character, this young lady, she's Asian? It seems like it to me, and moreso because she's in China, and her father seems to be a very important man there, and she referred to the country as if she was a part of it, as in being a native Chinese. And it definitely makes the story more interesting if she is. She seems very aberrant and rebellious, but that gives her more of a complex value to her character. It gives her that edge, you know? And I'm also assuming that there's an arrangement that specifically involves Tristan and that girl? Maybe something like an arranged marriage, perhaps? Maybe an enterprise in hopes of consolidating two corporations? Hm. I wonder. Well, in any case, I'm happy for Tristan. That he's getting his own story, hah. Well, I'm happy that Tristan is going to be a main character. I don't know why, but I really like him! Well, there are plenty of reasons to that statement, but I'll end up making more of this review than necessary. As usual, your writing is good as pie, and I'm no English major...yet, but I didn't catch any errors. Actually, I didn't expect to catch any errors, so there's no need for me. And it's also very good that you're updating once a week. That's very satiable for a reader who's already dove head first into this story. Ahem, me included. Applauds for your job well done on this sequel-though-not-so-sequely story! |
![]() ![]() The story is nice..a good thing to start up a sequel..and absolutely still funny! hehe...i can't wait to see the tension between tristan and the girl-he bumped into-in beijing...what a very small world for the 2 of them...keep updating!) |