Reviews for Through Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() interesting... can't wait to see what the true plot is... i know i asked this in my other review already, but is the girl asian? lolz... just curious... can't wait to see Tristan move on with someone else... yay! love will by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good b day gift for me, even though my b day is on tuesday, but whatever. i love this story even though its the first chapter and i should be reading the second... hey is the girl asian? lolz... okay going to read the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA. i love that tristan will be with sammy. thatll get the asian girl all twisted, though i hope nothing bad happens to sammy; i still love her to death. and maybe will'll find himself a girlfriend...wot! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luffly so far. Sorry I didn't get to the first chapter..I dunno how I missed it. No comments really...up in the beginning of this chapter you have a couple places where spaces were forgotten, but other than that I didn't notice anything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun, fun, fun, fun, fun... I'm really adoring the sound of this. Yay more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no! theyre being split up! lol. oh well. it had to happen sometime. so the wacky girl from Japan is going to be there, is she? cool. |
![]() ![]() hmm... mysterious... exciting... ) I have some guesses but I'm kinda too lazy to put them down at the moment. Oh phew, good to know that you have the general plot in mind already. b/c some people who just try to think of stuff while writing get writer's block. So I'm glad you already have things in mind. -minime- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad this one is on Tristan; he is so awesome, definatly my favorite character. And I love the fact that the girl is asian, not enough of them on this site. Can't wait for next week! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Vwhhe..another great chapter. Heh, in most stories when writers put down the character's dialogue, and the conversation just switched between the two, it gets confusing because you don't who is talking what. In your story, from the dialogue you can tell who is saying it, and heh, I enjoyed that. Hmm, I didn't know you were allowed to smoke in the schools, but considering that he is the new head of the two schools, heh, I guess that gives him a privelege...*grins* Anyways, great chapter and good luck on the next one! *winks* |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, i'm gonna bet anything you like that the girl from last chappie is stephen lee's sister. am i right? can't wait for more, this is gonna be really interesting. cya later ~ Alenor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the plot thickens |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah...*sings* love is in the air. Yay! Will's going to Wrenfield! I |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heya maeven. wow. i totally loved the chapter. it was nice of tristan to do that, even though it didnt work out for vincent. hhehe. im so glad to see you update thoug. it made my day after having not so fun of a day. and im so curious about the last part. gosh, you have to update soon ok? really soon. i love you for it :D take care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I liked it! Please continue! It was really good! |