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   Mya von Dor chapter 1 . 5/24/2006 Interesting! I'm glad this story takes place elsewhere, gives it a whole other spin to it and everything. Romance in China, fun! :D |
| cRavingsAniTy chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 Teehee, Maeven. I adore you. :D YAY! More stuff to read! Love it so far. :D Although my head hurts so I don't understand much. Lawl. Later! |
| gypsylass chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 yayya! you're back! huzah! i cant wait for more wonderful writings from you! |
| DiddlingFiddles chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 AH! i have been waiting for the sequel for about. however long it took. :] i like it. |
| roguedork chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 MOre MORE MORE |
| dee chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 very excited for the sequel! |
| I'll never tell chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 you mentioned something about the girls uncle?whatever you do DO NOT MAKE HIM AN EVIL UNCLE THAT THE GIRL MUST ESCAPE FROM WITH TRISTAN'S HELPthat would be much too much like False Facades. |
| Carbon Slash chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 Love it! It's awesome! Can't wait to read more _ |
| For What Its Worth chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 their parents are going to force them together, aren't they? Poor Tristan. lol. |
| whacked chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 you have no idea how many times i have refreshed your page looking for the sequel and yay! its finally here! so far its good, more detailed than False Facades, i can't wait to read more...so shall wait for the next update |
| Sargon chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 Hi Maeven...(don't know whether i should use your real name...) I LOVE IT LOLIt's amazing and Will is STILL like me... spooky... do we know each other?hahahahahaha...anywayum its really really good and wow!Sargon |
| complacent-lin chapter 1 . 5/23/2006 heya! Okay, cool story! Well, beginning chapter. Lol, you explained so much in the first chapter! I guess thats good for us who have read false facades, but i dunno about new readers...anyway, i like the use of chinese-ness, ASIAN power! It gives it an exotic touch to the story, i like your new character, she sounds like me, haha. Be careful not to make it too much like false facades, the love/hate thing i mean. Its an awesome and long chapter, so keep up the good work, and hopefully i dont have to wait about half a year until the next update! Just kidding. Lin |
| LaFleurRouge chapter 1 . 5/22/2006 Yey! You're back and it looks like the ball will just keep on rolling. Great beginning but when do we find out her name? Ahh, I was starting to wonder when I'd find something alse to read! Can't wait for the next one and it seems I'll be reading from the very beginning this time. Just a tip to make it easier on yourself, try to write an outline and plan out the story line that you have in your head to make it easier to rearrange things when the plan in your head decides to take some new twist and then you can accomadate for it, also try to write a few chapters ahead of what your posting so that you have time to sit on it and revise it to make it perfect for you. If these were unwanted then sorry but I just wanted to pass on useful information to correct problems other authors have so you don't find yourself suffering in the same way. Have fun, I know I always do as a reader. Im so glad it's Tristan's turn! WooHoo! |
| TheShizno chapter 1 . 5/22/2006 Great intro, I'm really looking foward to a good story. |
| Isobel Evans chapter 1 . 5/22/2006 I really like tristan! And this new girl sure is interesting! I'm so excited about your story! I hope you update soon! |