This looks like its going to be a really good story. It might be a bit confusing for thoes who havent read False Facades, but since it was such a good story there probably wont be many people who havent read it yet anyways, so no worries. Im really excited for this story it looks like it has lots of potiential. _

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loved it!

SCREAM! YAY for Tristan! And Will! I'm so glad you decided to put up a sequel! MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH MWAH. *sings* Tristan's gonna get a girl~~ XD By the way, is the girl Asian? Even though you described her as having brownish-black hair, it could still be Asian.. or not. And she speaks English... And Chinese. Hm. Meh? Anyway, it's cute so far.. Looking forward to your next update! XD

Yay! You're back! So far I'm loving it. Hopefuly next chapter he'll know her name:) Interesting that the necklace just 'happened' to find its way to her pocket- dun dun dun. Hmm I noticed that 'He stood up to give chase after the girl who's been the bane of his existence the whole day' should probably be 'He stood up to give chase after the girl who'd been the bane of his existence the whole day'. Just a tense issue, one of my pet peeves. Otherwise, excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.

oh nice, very interesting start. i love itt && cant wait for the next chapter!

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Yeah! the sequel...I love Tristan and I can't wait to read more. I liked the old lady hitting him with her back...very funny

That was a great start! I love your writing. This was a very interesting beginning and I'm already hooked. I'm curious about the girl and who she is. Poor Tristen though, it was such a bad day for him. The old lady tripping him was kinda funny... Anyways, great job. Can't wait till next week.

Of course I'll stick around for chapter two. It was terrific. By all means, I hope you update soon.

I'm so happy there's a sequal! I was sitting at my computer when I recieved an e-mail and I just couldn't believe what I saw. I thought to myself 'what is going on? I thought she was done...' so I checked it out and i'm ecstatic! I love how you started it and I can't wait until next week!

yay im so happy to have you back here writing. i totally missed it, and i hope to talk to you again really soon. awesome job.

whoohoo! girl's got some spunk! sounds interesting so far!

YAY! I love your writing. and I am so excited for this new story. Everytime I open my email and see that you have written a new chapter, i'm excited. I love this chapter, and i'm especially glad you are writing sooner. yay!

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I'm so glad that there's a sequel; the characters in False Facades are really hard to put down!

hehe,this was a funny chapter.

oh, just a random question: is the girl Asian? ;;

I really like this intro Keep is comming.. i love it haha

SWET! WOT WOOT WOT!I'm so happy you're making a sequel/Tristan's story. i LOVE tristan; he's such a cutie. i'm glad you decided he deserves a loving girlfriend like sammy, even if this chinese girl is a little too saucy and sarcastic for he tastes. oh well. loving the story though. lemme guess; her father and tristan's dad are business partners and they have an arranged marriage? MWAHAHAHAHA. lol. just kidding. im sure they dont have an arranged marriage, but they are connected somehow besides that stupid necklace right?

im eager to read the rest of this. PLEASE update son; you killed me with False Facades; i couldnt stop peeing in my pants...heheeh, remember that? anyways, dont make me wait THAT long.

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