I just wanted to say that I have enjoyed this story a lot and hope that you continue to write amazing stories. With that being said please please please finish this story...I know that you are probably super super busy, but please don't take a year to update or fall of the end of the earth. Good writers (the really really good ones) are getting harder to come by on FP...so please don't give up on us...I really want to read the rest of Tristen and Adel's story. Also there are not enough straight forward asian character stories on FP (Im not talking sci fi type)...Anyway to end my little rant thanks for the amazing stories. Please don't stop writing.

mah! i'm on a high from your stories! PLZ UPDATE!

Mia:)

Great update on this story. I love how Adel hung in there and at least attempted to confront her father! Looking forward to the end!

OH MY FREAK. You have to update. I will go insane. I love everybody. Your writing never ceases to crack me up, especially with that Will. :) SO UPDATE, GIRL. I need closure.

Though, I kinda hate her mom and the guy her mom ran away with still. I just feel really bad for the rest of her family. :(

They make such a freakin' aweshum couple! Sorry, I'm kinda all over the place. . Basically: I love this. I want more. Give me more.

I can't decide how I feel about your stories. I like the storyline, your writing is amazing, and you have an awesome sense of humor. But a couple of minor things bother me (trust me, they're realy minor) but because I feel like they're not impairing the story much and it's probably just me, I won't bother you with them.

CANNOT wait to find out what Adel is up to!

your stories are seriously amazing! i loved false facades and i'm sorry i didn't review but i had to read about tristan! i want everyone to be happy and seriously you just made my day! btw i read both your stories in less than 24 hours...i hope you write more about the other characters as well:)

I love this story, and also enjoyed it's prequel. Hopefully, you will continue writing until the end, so we can are see what happens between Tristan and Adel.

~Shadowstreak

hi, it's me again. hehe. okay, i just want to say that i do love tristan now. yup. i love him to pieces. and i kinda like how adel's sorta growing a backbone (about time, hehe). no seriously, despite all my complaints, i still love this story and i hope you continue. and yes, will's still my fave. thanks for sharing this!

okay, i just need to get this out of my chest. i f*cking hate her mother. and the guy too, whatever his f*cking name was who ran off with her. i didn't like adel's reaction when she found out that her father already knew about her mom's death. if anything, i felt even sadder for her father. sure he was in denial, sure he was weak, but would that make me think low of him? no, on the contrary that would just make me love him more. because it meant that he really loved her mother even after all that b*tch did, because that just showed me the extent of his pain. her father's behavior was more acceptable to me, his selfishness for neglecting her and all that, the reason for all that were more acceptable to me, he was in pain and sometimes, unjust and horrible as it may sound, when people are in pain, they are usually oblivious to other's pain. to some extent, i could actually forgive him for that. i'm not saying it was okay for him to treat adel that way, but compared to what her b*tch of a mother did? well, let's just say her father's reason was just more bearable. what was her mother's reason? her selfishness stemmed from happiness, from the need to be with her b*stard lover, whereas her father was that of sorrow. her reason was very shallow in my opinion. gawd, she wasn't even miserable with her father, if he was treating her badly and all i may have understood but it wasn't the case, damn i just hate her.

i do agree with most of adel's initial reaction, though. her mother deserved to die, she and her lover did not deserve a happy ending. and yes, her mother did not love them enough. i hope adel stood by that position.

i'm currently on chap 18 and i don't know why, but this story was starting to annoy me. adel annoyed me, tristan annoyed me, the only character that kept me smiling was will. i love false facade but this one was starting to really get on my nerves. adel was a tad too whiny and becoming this i'm-so-cool-chick-who-knew-kung-fu-but-can't-really-do-anything-right-when-i-needed-to, tristan was becoming an ass and a hell too stupid i want to give him a wry look (seriously, dude?) ugh, i really don't know why but the way they behave was really irking me. ugh..i'm still reading, though.

I read False Facades and this is a good sequel. :) Keep up the good work.

OMG! update! this story has a lot of plot twists, but it is pure genious! how many more chapters till the end?

Well, I finally got around to reading both chapters 28 and 29 and I just can't get over how easily I fall in love with this story even after not seeing it for a year. You are extremely awesome! All I have to say is that I am really loving the relationship between Adel and Tristan. I always look forward to reading their interactions with each other, whether over phone, email or anything.

My favorite part of both chapters was at the end of Chapter 28 when they were parting at the airport. It was sweet and funny at the same time and that's what I love about these two. They don't seem to have a very normal relationship.

Keep up the awesome story and hopefully we'll see another chapter soon.

Thank you so much for putting so much time and effort into this. Your readers worship you like a god. lol At least I do.

I love you

Wow. This is truly an amazing story :D

I've got a few points to highlight:

1) The POV in the story seems to randomly change without any sign a lot. It gets a bit confusing.

2) A few grammatical mistakes...but most of them should have been pointed out :)

And that's really basically all I can remember for now. You've got an AWESOME story .