I don't what it is about your story but it's absolutely wonderful. I can't help but love both of the characters - Tristan and Adel, especially the latter (I especially love her last thought - ''Well. I guess this means you're meant to be mine, after all.'')!

The way they meet is very interesting, and I can't help but laugh at how that old lady keeps on popping up and the whole misunderstanding with the necklace... And wonderful descriptions...

I love Tristan! This is by far the best story I've read on fictionpress. :))) Keep writing, you're a great writer. :D

Very nice story! Lol I hope Will gets lucky with Adam! Haha, thanks for posting this story it was a pleasure. ;) ... u should totally write one about Will! :)

Thank god I decided to read this after it got finished. I might've just busted a vein. A year? Seriously. If it wasn't for hw good this story is I'm pretty sure you'd be dead by now. Never heard of tltr. Thnx for the update. Off to read one of your masterpieces now (false facades). Read it once before but forgot most of it. Happy last day of 2012 my dear! Dont take six plus years to fart out another masterpiece! That should be your new years resolution!
P.s I'm thinking your response to this might just be tltr. Lol.

whatever happened to Danielle and Caine's relationship? Or even Danielle at all?

Okay so just a thought, the ticket logic isn't really working out here. Why can't Sam just give her ticket to Jack? That way Jack and carrie can be together at Wrenfield and Sam and Vincent can be together at Crestan? I know the story wouldn't work or whatever that way, but it's kind of an obvious flaw in logic because Sam can stay now that there will be girls at Crestan...

Cute! Do you think you'll make any more false facades spin offs? ( that's what they are since they're not sequels unless you could call them that or maybe it's the same...I wonder?)

Oh man, I don't know what to say. This is just too good. :D I love Tristan and Adel together, and I love the way their relationship developed, and I just love the way they interact. I remember following this before, and then losing track of it, but now I've found it again and I can't express just how happy I am that it's complete! :DDD This was just amazing and sweet and beautifully romantic - thank you for writing it and for brightening up my day!

WHY ARE YOU DOING THAT SAMMY

THEY WERE HAVING A MOMENT SAMMY

WHY SAMMY

THEY WERE HAVING A MOMENT

URGHHHH.

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-cries in a corner- I-I just reviewed to tell you I'm not a lurker... maybe...

But thank you so much for allowing all of us such an amazing read, really, thank you for writing. I can't wait to see more moments like this in the story and I can't wait to read more of this story. Really, thank you so much for being an author and writing and posting this here. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Thank you. c:

YOU'RE SO AWESOME THANK YOU FOR PUTTING EVERYTHING BACK THANK YOU THANK YOU!
:) *w*

Hi, Maevan! You are such an awesome writer! I'm just a beginner so I don't have much of anything to say, but it seems like there are a couple of sentences where you forgot to end it, like what room was the AP Chemistry. Anyway, thank you for such an awesome story!

I loved your story so much. I think I actually preferred this to False Facades, just because this one was slightly 'lighter' than the former (as in it wasn't as serious). I love the relationship between the two and the characters are pretty awesome... although Will needs a partner too -he seems so lonely... Anyway, its a really good read and I'll silently support you and whatever stories you may write

I LOVE THIS! ADEL AND TRISTAN ARE THE PERFECT COUPLE (NOT ACTUALLY PERFECT BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN) I NEED MORE OF THEM. OR ACTUALLY, ANY OF THEM. I NEED MORE OF THIS SERIES, DON'T STOP, PLEASE! AUTHOR TO AUTHOR, YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! THE FIRST ONE WAS AMAZING AND THIS ONE WAS JUST AS LOVELY. YOU NEED TO CONTINUE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND TERMINATE YOU! BUT THEN YOU COULDN'T WRITE MORE, BACKUP PLAN, I'LL KIDNAP YOU. YEAH, OKAY, I'M NOT A FREAK, SORRY FOR FREAKING, BUT I NEED MORE, JUST SAYING. THANKS AGAIN FOR THE WONDERFUL WRITING!

Oh, Asian people :) I hope the girl is portrayed well. I don't like stereotypes.
I love this story and it's prequel!

I love this story! The transition of Adel's relationship with Tristan was amazingly well-paced and utterly believable, and their chemistry... gosh! Their interaction with one another is romantic without being cheesy, you walk the thin line very well! :D Will is as hilarious as ever, though it is kinda sad how he still ends up being single, unless a little something something's gonna bloom between him and Adam...? The thought makes me squirm with evil delight, hehehe. :D

I'm still curious as to what on earth their mothers left them, though, and I wonder how their dads would react. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to learn to live with the mystery, much like Mr Harland. :D Keep writing!