Reviews for August |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A lovely story :) I was sad to see it end though. Hope you continue writing here on FP sometime soon! Plus I like the photos you chose that best suited the characters in the story...I kind of pictured them like that too. Anyway, ciaoz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this n |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not too bad of a story. The plot was pretty good, only thing I could say against the story is the rating seems a little high for your content. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. You should keep writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so yeaha i so love this story please tell me that theres more. i need more i mean i'm not t fan of reading but good god who in the hell wouldn't read this. i love you [ in i friend way of course.]so when can i look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When are you going to update? I want to know what happens. Um.. I also have a few... comments though. You have to remember these are teenage BOYS! Teens in normal are all horny so them not doing anything, even handjobs, is really weird. I can understand the 'no sex' but not even touching each other naked or rubbing against each other? It doesnt seem realistic. Anyway I really do love the story... but can you make August a little more.. not so much cry-y face? I DO like this story and will continue reading so please UPDATE! MORE SOON ~shadow |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god, more please. seriously, you have me so hooked on this story, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so i'll be honest and say that in the beginning, this story wasn't that great. the writing quality was sub-average and the characters were practically bi-polar. not so good. but its gotten WAY BETTER! it doesn't even seem like the same story anymore. you're writing has really improved and it shows through, so kudos! and the characters are a bit more stable in their moods and decisions. i like that cody has a nasty history, it makes for a good plot line. seriously, good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Ive been grounded, so I had to print out the story and read it, but now I finally get to review and tell you... YOU ARE A GENIUS! OMG! I love you! I just, ADORE this story to death! I cried, and like, laughed, and screamed in frustration and stormed about and collapsed with laughter and everything, it was SO GOOD! please continue! I dont want this to be the end of Cody and Ausgust... oh, btw, I drew a pic of them together! (okay, I drew 3, but whatever), and I just love them so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just read this story again! It's simply wonderful. BTW Cody looks like Randy Romance xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() *crying tears of sweet joy* this is so beautiful, i "heart" you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. :] Is this the end, or is there more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! You should make Cody’s 18 birthday during Christmas. It would be so sweet. August could buy him, of course after Cody’s mother approval, a puppy or small kitten so Cody would have chance to take care of something and have less time for thinking and self-pitying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So the angst begins! Love it all! More drama! By the way: August is to salfish and Cody is to to numb. It's so great! |